“Genetically modifying food has many great benefits and the act of gene editing has also been shown to have enourmous benefits.”
Rewritten Sentence – If scientists are right that genetically modifying food shows enormous benefits, as I think they are, then we need to reassess the popular assumption that gene editing has also been shown to have enormous benefits.
“The first sign of gentic engineering was in modifying food. Genetically modifying food has been seen to have enourmous benefits such as faster growing plants, tastier food, and increased supply of food.”
Rewritten Sentence – By focusing on the benefits of genetically modifying food such as faster growing plants, tastier food, and increased supply of food, our society is overlooks the deeper problem of using this technology to genetically modify humans.
